Lacanoodle@literature.cafe to Aneurysm Posting@sopuli.xyz · 6 months agoCan you?literature.cafeimagemessage-square14linkfedilinkarrow-up146
arrow-up146imageCan you?literature.cafeLacanoodle@literature.cafe to Aneurysm Posting@sopuli.xyz · 6 months agomessage-square14linkfedilink
minus-squareTheAlbatrosslinkfedilinkarrow-up48·6 months agoThis reads fine? It could use some commas but otherwise makes sense
minus-squareDrusas@fedia.iolinkfedilinkarrow-up6·6 months agoFor some of us, the lack of commas does make it hard to read.
minus-squareArthur Besse@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up5·6 months agowhere would commas go to make it make sense? 🤔
minus-squareTheAlbatrosslinkfedilinkarrow-up24·6 months agoAlright, it needs some other punctuation, too, but that’s not so bad. I’m raising my kids by “if you have anything nice to say, say it” and “if you have anything nice you can do, do it”.
minus-squareArthur Besse@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up5·6 months agoi read it twice and somehow didn’t notice the word “do” appears twice 🤡
minus-squareTheAlbatrosslinkfedilinkarrow-up3·6 months agoLmao that’ll do it! And demonstrates why OP coulda used some punctuation
This reads fine? It could use some commas but otherwise makes sense
For some of us, the lack of commas does make it hard to read.
where would commas go to make it make sense? 🤔
Alright, it needs some other punctuation, too, but that’s not so bad.
I’m raising my kids by “if you have anything nice to say, say it” and “if you have anything nice you can do, do it”.
i read it twice and somehow didn’t notice the word “do” appears twice 🤡
Lmao that’ll do it!
And demonstrates why OP coulda used some punctuation
That’ll do do it!