Lacanoodle@literature.cafe to Aneurysm Posting@sopuli.xyz · 11 hours agoCan you?literature.cafeimagemessage-square11fedilinkarrow-up130
arrow-up130imageCan you?literature.cafeLacanoodle@literature.cafe to Aneurysm Posting@sopuli.xyz · 11 hours agomessage-square11fedilink
minus-squareTheAlbatrosslinkfedilinkarrow-up31·11 hours agoThis reads fine? It could use some commas but otherwise makes sense
minus-squareArthur Besse@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up3·10 hours agowhere would commas go to make it make sense? 🤔
minus-squareTheAlbatrosslinkfedilinkarrow-up15·9 hours agoAlright, it needs some other punctuation, too, but that’s not so bad. I’m raising my kids by “if you have anything nice to say, say it” and “if you have anything nice you can do, do it”.
minus-squareArthur Besse@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up2·8 hours agoi read it twice and somehow didn’t notice the word “do” appears twice 🤡
minus-squareTheAlbatrosslinkfedilinkarrow-up2·8 hours agoLmao that’ll do it! And demonstrates why OP coulda used some punctuation
This reads fine? It could use some commas but otherwise makes sense
where would commas go to make it make sense? 🤔
Alright, it needs some other punctuation, too, but that’s not so bad.
I’m raising my kids by “if you have anything nice to say, say it” and “if you have anything nice you can do, do it”.
i read it twice and somehow didn’t notice the word “do” appears twice 🤡
Lmao that’ll do it!
And demonstrates why OP coulda used some punctuation
That’ll do do it!