the missing word bothers me, too. It also got killed in an intersection on its way to work, to show up in this meme.

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    6 hours ago

    I think a colon would be the most apt punctuation here.

    The tracks are now unruly and wild, the people tied to them: killed in crosswalks

    But to be honest I was fine with no punctuation. The bit that most bothers me is the choice of preposition. You don’t go in a crosswalk. You go on it. Or maybe you’re at the crosswalk when you’re killed. But certainly not in.