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minus-square@Agrivar@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglish2•6 months agomaybe you wanna try another round of editing? still reads like gibberish to my eyes…
minus-square@Mandy@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkEnglish1•6 months agoAt this point its not my fault anymore my dude or dudette Sounds pretty coherent to me
minus-squareVulKendovlinkfedilinkEnglish1•edit-26 months agoI understood it, only change I’d make now is ‘woman’ to ‘women’. Edit: also missed a ‘get’ between ‘can’t’ and ‘enough’.
maybe you wanna try another round of editing? still reads like gibberish to my eyes…
At this point its not my fault anymore my dude or dudette
Sounds pretty coherent to me
I understood it, only change I’d make now is ‘woman’ to ‘women’.
Edit: also missed a ‘get’ between ‘can’t’ and ‘enough’.