• Agrivar@lemmy.world
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    11 months ago

    maybe you wanna try another round of editing? still reads like gibberish to my eyes…

      • VulKendov@reddthat.com
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        11 months ago

        I understood it, only change I’d make now is ‘woman’ to ‘women’.

        Edit: also missed a ‘get’ between ‘can’t’ and ‘enough’.