Catoblepas to Poetry@lemmy.world · 8 hours agoWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithimagemessage-square12fedilinkarrow-up1136
arrow-up1136imageWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint SmithCatoblepas to Poetry@lemmy.world · 8 hours agomessage-square12fedilink
minus-squareYingwu@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·3 hours agoPoetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·edit-22 hours agoSure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO. You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up1·edit-22 hours agoSome phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
Poetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.
You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.