Catoblepas to Poetry@lemmy.world · 2 months agoWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithimagemessage-square18fedilinkarrow-up1304
arrow-up1304imageWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint SmithCatoblepas to Poetry@lemmy.world · 2 months agomessage-square18fedilink
minus-squareYingwu@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up6·2 months agoPoetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up3·edit-22 months agoSure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO. You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up5·edit-22 months agoSome phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up3·2 months agoSo the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1·edit-22 months agoYeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s Live Laugh Love Level.
Poetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.
You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
Thank you captain obvious.
So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
Yeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s
Live Laugh Love Level.