After Jules eating a tasty burger I was feeling confident enough to take on The Stare. It’s my best painting yet but the expression isn’t quite right, it’s lacking intensity of the original and I’m not sure what I’m missing. Feedback?
I’m doing one more SLJ in this series, it’s time for Mace Windu. That’ll make 16 and then I’m in to paint some family members. Not sure I’ll share them here, privacy and all. But this series has me confident enough to try, I’ve learned so so much! Thank you for all the feedback, critiques, and advice!
There’s some very slight differences in the eyes. You painted them a little bit wider / more open, which shows fear mixed with anger rather than pure anger and annoyance. The photo has his pupils a bit more dilated but with smaller highlights, exaggerating the dilation effect a bit more.
Overall fantastic work though! I really like this one!
Oh good catch! Thank you!!