• vegeta@lemmy.world
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    3 days ago

    I felt a great disturbance in the Farce, as if millions of leopards suddenly cried out in terror and were suddenly silenced. I fear face eating has happened.

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      3 days ago

      Not bad, not bad at all. I would make a couple changes though. For example, why would the leopards cry out in terror? How about:

      I felt a great disturbance in the Farce, as if millions of leopards suddenly cried out in terror hunger and were suddenly silenced sated. I fear a mass face eating has happened.

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        Yes - Leopards are the face eaters, they should only cry out in terror, if there are no faces to be eaten.

        I think it’s been a long time since Leopards had so many faces showing up for dinner, willingly to be eaten.

        And all faces brought a little appetizer with them, they are all wearing Surprised Pikachu Jpeg Masks. An extra treat for Leopards.