Three months on and I’ve definitely improved since last time. This was the best of several takes, and although I was trying a bit harder than usual it’s not too far from my usual zero-effort voice. I just need to remember to keep the resonance tight and stay bright.
I’d give this a C- “almost satisfactory”, so let it rip!
I agree, and I think the conflating of pitch vs resonance (or size vs weight, depending on how we’re looking at it here) is erring too far on the size/pitch side and not enough on the weight/resonance side. It’s good progress, though! I’ve been at this for two months and am nowhere near as good.