cm0002@lemmy.world to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 2 months agoAlmost made itlemmy.mlimagemessage-square14linkfedilinkarrow-up1473cross-posted to: shitposting@lemmy.ml
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minus-squareitslilithlinkfedilinkarrow-up3·2 months agoMaybe “even if your bowels are ripping, never in the break go shitting”? It’s still a bit clunky, but the meter works and the grammar is technically correct I think, even if an inversion is unconventional
Maybe “even if your bowels are ripping, never in the break go shitting”?
It’s still a bit clunky, but the meter works and the grammar is technically correct I think, even if an inversion is unconventional